that’s entirely my fault! This game was built on my PC and I didn’t get a chance to update it for tablet or mobile. I’ll make that a priority for next update! Try landscape mode, that helped another player.
I love the writing and word play, as well as the characters and pov shifts! The worldbuilding and lore are also so interesting! Tldr: I'm obsessed.
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I was having issues accessing the two options to submit bug reports, so I hope this works!
When selecting the first dialogue option here, several errors pop up on the following page:
Also! I noticed that the intro of the game is filled with lore that is organically dispersed throughout the text. As a reader, I was overwhelmed with the new lore before I got my footing as my character. I wonder if it would be possible to put that lore somewhere as reference material in the menu/stats page vs as a prologue to the prologue.
omg thank you so much <3 I really appreciate that you’re enjoying it. I’ll go fix the bug. I was messing with that way too much last night and should have left it alone.
Funny enough, the feedback I got before was not enough lore and now it’s too much. Striking that balance for folks has been hard for me. I’ll keep that in mind as I continue writing, but in full transparency I likely will not change the way it’s set up now, mostly because the new version serves as an opening for the entire series.
Hi! I enjoyed this, it’s a great start! I love the little hints that people and places are familiar to you, yet you don’t know why. I’m so intrigued to know more!
I do wish you would expand on some of the world building/lore a bit. I know it’s just starting and I can tell you have an air of mystery to it, but it’s almost a little too vague. For example, I have no idea what a Prophet actually is or does, nor your Core for that matter. Having some context to what the MC is trying to be and accomplish would help us relate to the character better.
Again, it’s a great start and I look forward to seeing where you go with this!
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Where even is the start button
all images are clickable babe <3
Sorry it was all weird on my tablet
that’s entirely my fault! This game was built on my PC and I didn’t get a chance to update it for tablet or mobile. I’ll make that a priority for next update! Try landscape mode, that helped another player.
Oh no no, it's ok! I figured it out
I love the writing and word play, as well as the characters and pov shifts! The worldbuilding and lore are also so interesting! Tldr: I'm obsessed.
Possible edits:
I was having issues accessing the two options to submit bug reports, so I hope this works!
When selecting the first dialogue option here, several errors pop up on the following page:
Also! I noticed that the intro of the game is filled with lore that is organically dispersed throughout the text. As a reader, I was overwhelmed with the new lore before I got my footing as my character. I wonder if it would be possible to put that lore somewhere as reference material in the menu/stats page vs as a prologue to the prologue.
omg thank you so much <3 I really appreciate that you’re enjoying it. I’ll go fix the bug. I was messing with that way too much last night and should have left it alone.
Funny enough, the feedback I got before was not enough lore and now it’s too much. Striking that balance for folks has been hard for me. I’ll keep that in mind as I continue writing, but in full transparency I likely will not change the way it’s set up now, mostly because the new version serves as an opening for the entire series.
thank you again <3
edit: bug has been fixed!
yes!! That's totally your right as the creator of the world, and I'm excited to see what you craft next!
Lil question, is pantella a love interest ?
Hello!!
You can become best friends with Pantella, but they are not romanceable as they are not interested in romantic or sexual relationships.
Hi! I enjoyed this, it’s a great start! I love the little hints that people and places are familiar to you, yet you don’t know why. I’m so intrigued to know more!
I do wish you would expand on some of the world building/lore a bit. I know it’s just starting and I can tell you have an air of mystery to it, but it’s almost a little too vague. For example, I have no idea what a Prophet actually is or does, nor your Core for that matter. Having some context to what the MC is trying to be and accomplish would help us relate to the character better.
Again, it’s a great start and I look forward to seeing where you go with this!
this feedback was incorporated in the most recent release <3
Oh, excellent! Welcome back! I’m excited to see you’re continuing this and I can’t wait to revisit this story!